Talk:South Sudanese politician John Luk Jok dies aged about 68

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Revision 4567992 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:28, 3 June 2020 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: One of these sources is based in Turkey, and when using a shortened name it calls him "Jok"; but the regional paper (The EastAfrican) and VOA both used shortened name "Luk", as does the quote from the South Sudanese Information Minister. So I went with "Luk". The only source that assigns an age at death is the Turkish one, which says 68. The EastAfrican doesn't try. VOA says he's "believed to have been born in 1952" (not wording we'd use: passive voice apparently meant to avoid saying who did the believing). The Turkish source says melodramatically that the cause of death is "yet to be revealed". VOA says it was "reportedly" complications from prostate cancer. The EastAfrican says the family spokesperson said he'd "been battling an illness for quite sometime". The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4567992 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:28, 3 June 2020 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: One of these sources is based in Turkey, and when using a shortened name it calls him "Jok"; but the regional paper (The EastAfrican) and VOA both used shortened name "Luk", as does the quote from the South Sudanese Information Minister. So I went with "Luk". The only source that assigns an age at death is the Turkish one, which says 68. The EastAfrican doesn't try. VOA says he's "believed to have been born in 1952" (not wording we'd use: passive voice apparently meant to avoid saying who did the believing). The Turkish source says melodramatically that the cause of death is "yet to be revealed". VOA says it was "reportedly" complications from prostate cancer. The EastAfrican says the family spokesperson said he'd "been battling an illness for quite sometime". The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.