Talk:Son of Indian hospital CEO commits suicide by jumping out of window

Credit: The title of this page was proposed by AlexandrDmitri.

Rationales

The article's last two sources look unverifiable but have been published by Times of India newsprint. Therefore, they are verifiable. Also, GT hospital is not a short form but it is the actual name of the hospital and does not have any kind of full form. Srinivas 06:00, 16 October 2009 (UTC)

Some copyediting in bold

• [..]He jumped from the building in front of her mother and she was shocked to see her son dying before her. Miten didn't leave a suicide note.

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Done

• At 21:00 the police received a call from the residents of the building saying that Miten had committed suicide in Maker Towers, Colaba. The police arrived there and took him to GT hospital but was declared dead on arrival.

Done

• The autopsy report of GT hospital stated that severe head injuries were the reason for his death. His body was then moved to Lilavati Hospital.

--AlexandrDmitri (talk) 11:31, 16 October 2009 (UTC)

Done Srinivas 11:48, 16 October 2009 (UTC)

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Revision 897724 of this article has been reviewed by Tempodivalse (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:39, 16 October 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I had to do some grammatical copyediting to get this up to publishing standards, however, I don't think I was "involved" enough to have to recuse myself from reviewing it. Tempodivalse [talk] 15:39, 16 October 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 897724 of this article has been reviewed by Tempodivalse (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:39, 16 October 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I had to do some grammatical copyediting to get this up to publishing standards, however, I don't think I was "involved" enough to have to recuse myself from reviewing it. Tempodivalse [talk] 15:39, 16 October 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.