Talk:Shooting injures three at Kennywood amusement park in Pennsylvania, US

Review of revision 4692139 [Not ready]

Revision 4692139 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:56, 29 September 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Multiple statements not found in sources NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I could not find the quotes and statements about how the park supplements security with police Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4692139 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:56, 29 September 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Multiple statements not found in sources NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I could not find the quotes and statements about how the park supplements security with police Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

New source

@Harobouri, Harbouri (alt):, thanks for adding a source which contains the missing quotes. I did notice, however, it also as substantially more information about the incident which would be nice to include in our article. Cheers, SVTCobra 13:12, 30 September 2022 (UTC)

I've added the following info:

• Updated park policies following the shooting
• Whether if the victims were involved with the shooting or not

Thanks! Harbouri (alt) (talk) 17:18, 30 September 2022 (UTC)

Review of revision 4692320 [Passed]

Revision 4692320 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:39, 30 September 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: See edit summaries for minor comments The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4692320 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:39, 30 September 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: See edit summaries for minor comments The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.