Talk:Scottish police arrest two over Glasgow apartment death

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Pi zero in topic Editprotected

Review of revision 1819707 [Not ready]

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I'm afraid I must object to your review for the following reasons:

  • Times do not necessarily require colons.
  • The use of the expression 'Strathclyde Police have arrested' makes more sense then saying 'Strathclyde Police arrested' because the specific time of the arrest was never actually reported in the sources. In any case, reporting the time of the suspects' expected court appearance is of significant importance to the story.
  • As to whether or not this story involves 'just Scotland' is subjective. In any case, Scotland is in the United Kingdom, so the use of the term 'UK' should be fine here, although admittedly specifying Scotland might have been a better idea since the article references the procurator fiscal, which only exists in Scotland.
  • One would have thought the reader would have been able to understand all the events, dates and times referred to in the article.
  • What exactly you mean when you say "there appears to be little logic as to when things appear" I do not know. What exactly did you mean by that?

In any case, I would have thought minor issues like these could have been easily rectified without simply failing the review. --Rayboy8 (my talk) (my contributions) 13:38, 24 February 2013 (UTC)Reply

Review of revision 1821141 [Passed]

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Could you please add Category:Ryan Peteranna (Wikinewsie), it seems I neglected to do so myself. --Rayboy8 (my talk) (my contributions) 16:57, 24 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

  Done --Pi zero (talk) 17:23, 24 March 2013 (UTC)Reply
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