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Talk:Savage on Santorum on Savage

Background notesEdit

Background sect includes material previously already reviewed and published from prior articles, cited in the Related news sect. This pertains to the last 2 paragraphs. -- Cirt (talk) 23:20, 20 March 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1441843 [Not ready]Edit

Thanks very much for the review and the helpful suggestions. I'll get on addressing these as best I can. :) -- Cirt (talk) 17:08, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Response to review by Pi zeroEdit

The santorum neologism has inspired satirical forms of parody. In this video, a vlogger teaches viewers how to say santorum in sign language.
Video: Kristin. (March 10, 2012).

I've taken several steps to address the review and helpful suggestions by Pi zero (talk · contribs):

  1.   Done. Removed the image (right) displayed initially. It was a video from a vlogger educating viewers on how to say santorum in sign language. See diff
  2.   Done. Copyedited the lede, removing quotations from the lede, instead modified to summary-style text. See diff.
  3.   Done. Replaced video file suggested for removal from review, with side-by-side of the two subjects discussed in the article. See diff.
  4. Made some other minor copyedits to improve thrust of the first paragraph and overall flow.
  5. Added a further response from another source. See diff.

Hopefully this is satisfactory to address concerns from the initial review. And thanks again for the helpful suggestions! :) -- Cirt (talk) 17:41, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1442999 [Passed]Edit

Thanks very much! :) -- Cirt (talk) 02:22, 22 March 2012 (UTC)
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