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As can be seen, this article is sourced entirely to primary sources, thus the {{Original reporting}} tag.

A summary of some of the recent chronology can be found at wikisource:Author:Sandra Kay Fluke and at commons:Sandra Fluke. :) -- Cirt (talk) 01:16, 14 March 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1434662 [Not ready]Edit

Response to review by Pi zeroEdit

  1. See below sect, Examples of similar news articles from other secondary sources. I've listed multiple other secondary sources that have covered this subject as well. It's newsworthy, noteworthy, educational, and topical. Other secondary news sources including New York Daily News, the International Business Times, and the National Journal, obviously think this is newsworthy enough to cover. We should too. :)
  2. If you have any specific recommendations regarding ways to alter the article stylistically in order to fix "a moderately superficial problem of presentation", please, suggest them! I'd be more than happy to look over specific advice and input about that. However, I did take care to painstakingly do my best to take into account advice from Pi zero (talk · contribs) from prior article reviews where issues were successfully addressed — and start right out with the most topical recent material, and proceed downwards chronologically with background material. This style was satisfactory by Pi zero (talk · contribs) in subsequent reviews.
  3. I think you'll find that locating the facts, to be verified, is not challenging. Each section of the article is pretty clear chronologically and as to background. The bulk of the material is sourced to the primary sources pertaining to each section. For example, the speech by the President of the United States, is sourced to his speech, at The White House, which is helpfully linked to, I might add, in the video, directly next to the article text. I've also gone ahead and added a few secondary sources to help with ease of reference confirmation, diff.

-- Cirt (talk) 05:21, 14 March 2012 (UTC)

Examples of similar news articles from other secondary sourcesEdit

Examples of similar news articles from other secondary sources:

  1. Nina Mandell. "Sandra Fluke says she won't be silenced by 'slut' attacks‎" — New York Daily News, March 13, 2012
  2. Sara Dover. "Sandra Fluke CNN Essay: Limbaugh, Others 'Cannot Silence Us'‎" — International Business Times, March 13, 2012
  3. Lara Seligman. "Sandra Fluke: I Won't Be Silenced‎" — National Journal, March 13, 2012
  4. Tina Korbe. "Sandra Fluke: I will not be silenced‎" — Hot Air, March 13, 2012
  5. Eddie Scarry. "Sandra Fluke pens op-ed for CNN‎" — The Blaze, March 13, 2012
  6. Kevin Spak. "Sandra Fluke: Name Calling Won't Silence Us" — Newser, March 13, 2012
  7. Pema Levy. "Sandra Fluke Op-Ed: Calling Us Prostitutes Won't Silence Us" — Talking Points Memo, March 13, 2012

-- Cirt (talk) 05:12, 14 March 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1435442 [Passed]Edit

Thank you. -- Cirt (talk) 18:31, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
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