Talk:San Diego State University pitcher taken first in baseball draft

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Peer review 1Edit

I added 3 more sources. Please re-review. Thanks! --Jayron32.talk.contribs 23:20, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Review revision 832397Edit

Good jobEdit

Sorry I was not able to improve this article or re-review it. It looks really good, with a very solid writing style.

I noticed two things for possible improvement:

  1. Quotes. Your story needs them. Could be the number 1 draft pick, a coach, an analyst, etc. Could also be something simple or something complex.
  2. Why were Pirates? and Twins teams who benefited? Explain that a bit and it plugs that hole nicely.

All-in-all, very good, but always room for improvement. Calebrw (talk) 06:30, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

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