There is some confusion in the Wikinews article between who led a team versus the entire makeup of the team.
There is no team of US scientists here. That team was led by someone at Penn State, but the Penn State source explicitly describes it as an international team.
I'm not sure whether or not the other team is made up entirely of UK scientists, but Waters and Billker were only its leaders.
The source says the "originally separate" work was by Baker and Clark, not Waters and Billker. Further, the Baker and Clark work seems to have fed into the team led by Llinas of Penn State, because Baker and Clark were looking at P. falciparum, which I also note is mentioned on Llinas's academic page; whereas Waters and Billker were looking at rodents, and the source notes that one team looked at P. falciparum while the other looked at P. berghei, and P. berghei infects rodents.
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There is some confusion in the Wikinews article between who led a team versus the entire makeup of the team.
There is no team of US scientists here. That team was led by someone at Penn State, but the Penn State source explicitly describes it as an international team.
I'm not sure whether or not the other team is made up entirely of UK scientists, but Waters and Billker were only its leaders.
The source says the "originally separate" work was by Baker and Clark, not Waters and Billker. Further, the Baker and Clark work seems to have fed into the team led by Llinas of Penn State, because Baker and Clark were looking at P. falciparum, which I also note is mentioned on Llinas's academic page; whereas Waters and Billker were looking at rodents, and the source notes that one team looked at P. falciparum while the other looked at P. berghei, and P. berghei infects rodents.
If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.
This is a very interesting article, and I've tried my best to unravel it and get it into publishable shape. It's much easier, however, to fix your own work and so problems may lurk on. BRS(Talk)(Contribs)16:44, 25 February 2014 (UTC)Reply
The Penn State source takes a lot of study for an outsider to untangle who did what. It doesn't help that Baker and Clark, working in England, are part of the international team whose leader is at Penn State, not part of the UK tream; that's easy to trip over.
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The Penn State source takes a lot of study for an outsider to untangle who did what. It doesn't help that Baker and Clark, working in England, are part of the international team whose leader is at Penn State, not part of the UK tream; that's easy to trip over.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
