Talk:Renegade General's forces claim responsibility for aerial attacks on Tripoli

Review of revision 2829097 [Passed]

Revision 2829097 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:17, 24 August 2014 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Adjusted attribution/credit here and there. If the point in the WN:lede were attributed to a member of his staff, that would be specific to Reuters, as SAPA cited an aide. Reuters was at UPDATE 5, but it seems there was nothing missing that was used here from UPDATE 2. I did look up UPDATE 2, for perspective; it wasn't hard to find by searching the internet for the old headline (including "UPDATE 2"), as there are usually some places that syndicated the earlier version and didn't update. I wondered about some points regarding the headline, but decided they were fine. whether it's neutral to describe Haftar as a "renegade"; but after reading up on his role in the godawful mess over there, the word choice seems pretty objective really. whether the claim of responsibility was really a key point, since Haftar's people and the Operation Dawn people agree on who's responsible; but I see the government says they're not sure. Indeed, one gathers it's hard to be sure of anything. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 2829097 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:17, 24 August 2014 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Adjusted attribution/credit here and there. If the point in the WN:lede were attributed to a member of his staff, that would be specific to Reuters, as SAPA cited an aide. Reuters was at UPDATE 5, but it seems there was nothing missing that was used here from UPDATE 2. I did look up UPDATE 2, for perspective; it wasn't hard to find by searching the internet for the old headline (including "UPDATE 2"), as there are usually some places that syndicated the earlier version and didn't update. I wondered about some points regarding the headline, but decided they were fine. whether it's neutral to describe Haftar as a "renegade"; but after reading up on his role in the godawful mess over there, the word choice seems pretty objective really. whether the claim of responsibility was really a key point, since Haftar's people and the Operation Dawn people agree on who's responsible; but I see the government says they're not sure. Indeed, one gathers it's hard to be sure of anything. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.