Talk:Palestinian released from Israeli prison following eight-month hunger strike
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Pi zero in topic Review of revision 2265944 [Passed]
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editJust some miscellaneous thoughts, for whoever might review this:
- The last paragraph has a couple of points I noticed (on first reading) bear thinking about as candidates for tweaking:
- The adjective "harsh"; the question is whether it comes across as attributed or as asserted opinion.
- The assertion that the Israelis acted out of fear his death would cause violence; pretty clearly needs attribution.
- Will clearly call for some thoughtful contemplation re neutrality; do the sources enable a balanced perspective, and does the article provide such?
Review of revision 2265944 [Passed]
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Revision 2265944 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:23, 26 December 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 2265944 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:23, 26 December 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |