Talk:Pakistani President signs bill to merge Federally Administered Tribal Areas with Khyber Pakhtunkhwa

Review of revision 4410921 [Passed]

Revision 4410921 of this article has been reviewed by Green Giant (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:56, 2 June 2018 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: A few copyedits e.g. we can talk about "a president" but capitalise if it is "the President" i.e. Hussain is the current President of Pakistan but he was one of the presidents at a Commonwealth meeting. I would recommend adding either a map (File:Khyber Pakhtunkhwa in Pakistan (claims hatched).svg), or a photo (File:Mamnoon Hussain 2014.jpg), or both. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4410921 of this article has been reviewed by Green Giant (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:56, 2 June 2018 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: A few copyedits e.g. we can talk about "a president" but capitalise if it is "the President" i.e. Hussain is the current President of Pakistan but he was one of the presidents at a Commonwealth meeting. I would recommend adding either a map (File:Khyber Pakhtunkhwa in Pakistan (claims hatched).svg), or a photo (File:Mamnoon Hussain 2014.jpg), or both. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Capitalization

@Green Giant: As I recall, the Wikinews:Style guide says to write "president" with a lower-case "p" unless it's directly attached to someone's name. --Pi zero (talk) 13:56, 2 June 2018 (UTC)

@Pi zero: I’ve changed it but I always understood it to be the difference between a generic reference (for example a group of presidents meeting at the UN) and a specific reference (for example the President of X Country speaking at the UN). I suppose it doesn’t make a huge difference but lowercase in this instance just doesn’t read well for me. Green Giant (talk) 14:10, 2 June 2018 (UTC)

addeditprotection

{{addeditprotection}}
•–• 10:30, 3 June 2018 (UTC)

@Acagastya: I've added my usual protection level for published articles still on the main page, which is semi-protection for edit, full protection for move. --Pi zero (talk) 12:04, 3 June 2018 (UTC)

You know what -- I will PM you about it.
•–• 13:27, 3 June 2018 (UTC)