Talk:Pakistan's governing coalition breaks apart

Please write with an international audience in mind. Please do not substitute 'and' with '&'. Do not self-publsih. Cheers, --SVTCobra 19:36, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

Update: I have done a complete rewrite, but now I must get ready for work, so no further work can be done on this by me. I hope it informs a bit more now. —Calebrw (talk) 18:13, 26 August 2008 (UTC)

Peer review

Revision 684442 of this article has been reviewed by Calebrw (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:30, 26 August 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: This article needs a bit more work on general sentence structure. Comments by reviewer: Just a few minor fixes should bring this article back to Review status. Calebrw (talk) 17:30, 26 August 2008 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 684442 of this article has been reviewed by Calebrw (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:30, 26 August 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: This article needs a bit more work on general sentence structure. Comments by reviewer: Just a few minor fixes should bring this article back to Review status. Calebrw (talk) 17:30, 26 August 2008 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Please review

This article has been up for review for over 18 hours. --SVTCobra 15:40, 27 August 2008 (UTC)

Review 2

I decided to go ahead and publish the article. It's been more then 24 hours since it was asked to be reviewed by another editor. I did the first draft but since my draft, it been basically 100% rewritten. I went though the article and the sources and it meet the guidelines. --PatrickFlaherty (talk) 01:15, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

Glad it worked out. PS: Thanks for the other editors that stepped in after my rewrite to finish it up. PPS: It's a good idea to use the Peer review template at {{subst:peer_reviewed|revid=|copyright=|newsworthy=|verifiable=|npov=|style=|reviewer=|comments=|time=~~~~~}}. —Calebrw (talk) 16:17, 28 August 2008 (UTC)

Edit

{{editprotected}} Category:Asif Ali Zardari & Category:Nawaz Sharif. Ali Rana (talk) 06:22, 1 October 2009 (UTC)

• Done--Brian McNeil / ^talk 18:41, 24 November 2009 (UTC)