Talk:Naomi Campbell testifies against former Liberian president

I'm not sure I totally understand the last sentence of this article:

"The court allowed Campbell a lawyer, however the lawyer cannot intervene during her testimony unless they protects her from self-incrimination."

I'm pretty sure it should be "unless they protect her from self-incrimination". But after reading the source I think it would be more clear if it said: 'The court allowed Campbell a lawyer, however the lawyer can only intervene during her testimony to protect her from self-incrimination.'

I'll change the last paragraph to that. FireLyte--spyre (talk) 12:10, 5 August 2010 (UTC)

You know you could have just edited the article and used as your edit summary "c/e," short for "copyedit." —Mikemoral♪♫ 14:40, 5 August 2010 (UTC)

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