Talk:Musician Phil Collins announces he will never play drums again
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Brian McNeil in topic Lead article
Review of revision 880709 [Passed] edit
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Revision 880709 of this article has been reviewed by DragonFire1024 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:36, 11 September 2009 (UTC).
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Revision 880709 of this article has been reviewed by DragonFire1024 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:36, 11 September 2009 (UTC).
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NPOV edit
This sentence is a problem: Millions of fans worldwide were showing their disappointment.
- a) It needs to be illustrated how and where
- b) It needs attribute to someone who might know that this is a fact.
Such a sentence cannot be floated 'naked'. Cheers, --SVTCobra 03:02, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
- I thought I saw it in the Daily Mail article...I just checked and cannot find it. So I just removed the bit. DragonFire1024 (Talk to the Dragon) 03:09, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
Lead article edit
Should this story become a lead article because it's so popular? --Rayboy8 (talk) 06:40, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
- If it can replace lead 3 or 4 by removing one of the older ones from the four leads, yes. --Brian McNeil / talk 08:37, 12 September 2009 (UTC)