Talk:Mother, brother of singer Jennifer Hudson found murdered, others reported missing
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Revision 714793 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at ~~.
Comments by reviewer: publish as breaking crime/entertainment story The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
- I also stand by this article through edit 714844. --SVTCobra 03:21, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
"others" missing edit
are there more people missing? I only know of "Julian King" --SVTCobra 03:38, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- The article says JK's mother cannot be found.
Title edit
Please, please, please! Stop trying to tell the entire story in the headline. This is a dreadfully long title which is a very American thing to do. There should be a concentrated effort to ensure that as many titles as possible will fit on one line if put up in the lead 2-4 positions. This could have been "Oscar actress's family in fatal shooting", or something like that. From my point of view, I'd never heard of Jennifer Hudson.
Post-Script. She's a Chav! She has a Burberry scarf! --Brian McNeil / talk 08:49, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- I agree, but the style guide says that Who, What, Where should always be included in the title. Who? Jennifer Hudson. What? Family Murdered. Where? US (as general as possible for international audience). Therefore the correct, shortest title would be: "American singer Jeniffer Hudson's family murdered". Gopher65talk 23:51, 25 October 2008 (UTC)