Talk:Marc Bartra to join Borussia Dortmund

Review of revision 4221871 [Passed]

Revision 4221871 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:02, 5 June 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: This is short; a bit more material would have been good. The 103 appearances thing didn't check out well. One source does say 103, but the other source says 33 youth appearances, 59 primera division, 22 champions league. Those numbers don't square in any way; without the youth appearances there are too few, with them there are too many. I decided to include the youth appearances and generalize to encompass both sources by saying over 100. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4221871 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:02, 5 June 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: This is short; a bit more material would have been good. The 103 appearances thing didn't check out well. One source does say 103, but the other source says 33 youth appearances, 59 primera division, 22 champions league. Those numbers don't square in any way; without the youth appearances there are too few, with them there are too many. I decided to include the youth appearances and generalize to encompass both sources by saying over 100. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.