Talk:Japan beats Aussie Spirit in first two games of series

Reporter notes

I have a copy of the roster for who played but it was not included in the notes below. I can provide this if necessary. Just forgot to attach to the PDF. :( Major apologies for the lack of clear writing. :( The notes were taken by myself and User:Hawkeye7 who attended the game with me. Hence the writing changes. The substance of the report is mostly game notes so not a particularly big deal. Holes were filled in by ACT softball related people sitting in the stands.

--LauraHale (talk) 00:29, 22 March 2012 (UTC)

Roster sheet

Because I realised for one part, I was looking at the ACT roster sheet... I will post the correct one here.

Aussie Spirit

Uniform #, name, batting order, position

16 Porter, Stacey, 1, 5

29 Long-Droppert, Verity, 2, 8

15 De Blaes, Brenda, 3, DP

25 Forkin, Chelsea, 4, 7

34 Stevenson, Jodie, 5, 2

27 Bowering, Jodie, 6, 3

2 Warwick, Clare, 7, 6

4 McManus Stacey, 8, 4

17 Godfrey, Leigh, 9, 9

19 Stokes, Vanessa, Flex, 1

Bench

32 Parnaby, Kaia

1 Wall, Jade

3 Cox, Michelle

10 McCallum, Jocelyn

11 Smethurst, Justine

12 Tollenaere, Kym

14 Holden, Sandra

20 Weaver, Melinda

22 White, Belinda

31 Murch, Aimee

--LauraHale (talk) 01:24, 22 March 2012 (UTC)

Review notes

Reconstructed from notes/article correlation:

11 Rie Mishiyama

6 Yuikiyo Mine

25 Yamato Fujita

26 Yukina Seki

15 Yamada

8 Kawano

28 Mani Souma

23 Kazuki Watanabe

18 Shizuyo Hamamoto

21 Haruka Fujino

12 Haruna Sakamoto

13 Misa Okubo

--Pi zero (talk) 03:53, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

Problems

• First game, bottom of the first: Porter stole third base. — didn't find this in the notes.
• Bottom of the second: "Leigh Godfrey bunted out but advanced Warwick" — the notes say #27, which would be Bowering, not Godfrey.
• Is Japan's #11 Mishiyama or Nishiyama?

--Pi zero (talk) 03:20, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1445439 [Not ready]

Revision 1445439 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:39, 24 March 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: See below. NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: What day of the week did this take place? The article now needs to say that, instead of "x nights ago". Could you remark here about "Porter stole third base", which I didn't see in the notes (eg, perhaps I just didn't know I was looking at it)? Could you remark/act on "Leigh Godfrey bunted out but advanced Warwick", which in the notes is #27 (Bowering) rather than #17 (Godfrey)? Is Japan's #11 Mishiyama or Nishiyama? These are the only unresolved issues; afaik, there are no other obstacles to publication. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1445439 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:39, 24 March 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: See below. NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: What day of the week did this take place? The article now needs to say that, instead of "x nights ago". Could you remark here about "Porter stole third base", which I didn't see in the notes (eg, perhaps I just didn't know I was looking at it)? Could you remark/act on "Leigh Godfrey bunted out but advanced Warwick", which in the notes is #27 (Bowering) rather than #17 (Godfrey)? Is Japan's #11 Mishiyama or Nishiyama? These are the only unresolved issues; afaik, there are no other obstacles to publication. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Date confusion was because I wrote the article on the 22nd for a game on the 21st. It was played on Wednesday.

Porter stealing the base is written on the side, next to line that says #29 bunted out but advanced batter to second.

Player name is Nishiyama. N, not M. My bad. --LauraHale (talk) 05:32, 24 March 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1445517 [Passed]

Revision 1445517 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 06:02, 24 March 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I paused over the newsworthiness of this, four days after the event. With the nature of the event, I'd say this really would go stale sometime soon; but it is OR, so, not yet I think. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1445517 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 06:02, 24 March 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I paused over the newsworthiness of this, four days after the event. With the nature of the event, I'd say this really would go stale sometime soon; but it is OR, so, not yet I think. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.