Talk:Israeli-American activist arrested for entering Gaza Strip
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Revision 684592 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:34, 27 August 2008 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I would have liked to see why Halper did this, the whole the is kind of blasé without a reason, SVTCobra 00:34, 27 August 2008 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 684592 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:34, 27 August 2008 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I would have liked to see why Halper did this, the whole the is kind of blasé without a reason, SVTCobra 00:34, 27 August 2008 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Wikinews:Neutral point of view edit
I may be wrong but I feel that this article doesn't meet Wikinews:Neutral point of view for example
- Halper was going to Israel along with 40 other activists -- the activists not going to Israel - the activists were visiting Gaza. Gaza is not part of Israel, it is part of palestine.
- No Background Human rights coalition: Gaza at worst since 1967
- a blockade enacted in 2007 by the international community -- a blockade by Israel not the international community. As far as I know the international community i.e. U.N and NGO's has been trying to get past the siege to deliver supplys
- Authorities said they gave Halper and the rest of the activists a "one-time" pass to enter Gaza to avoid provoking them. -- suggests they had right to stop a boat from entering Gaza and what could they be provoked to do.