Talk:Hawaiian Airlines announces iPad mini in-flight service

Review of revision 1978422 [Passed]

Revision 1978422 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:09, 31 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Although there's a lot of sources I can see how each one does provide new info. Actually, I wonder if there's a source missing because I had to trim a lot of stuff not in the sources. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1978422 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:09, 31 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Although there's a lot of sources I can see how each one does provide new info. Actually, I wonder if there's a source missing because I had to trim a lot of stuff not in the sources. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Melbourne

The Melbourne detail is from the external link: please take a moment to locate 'In-flight entertainment' section and look at its first sentence. (The file format is horribly unintuitive.) Thanks. :) Gryllida 13:10, 31 August 2013 (UTC)

I see, I hadn't checked the external link in great detail because it wasn't listed as being used as a source. Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 13:19, 31 August 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for moving the link and I will try remember this good point. Gryllida 13:25, 31 August 2013 (UTC)

No worries. I've restored all the info I removed. :) Another good tip for long and/or complex sources such as this is to leave a note to the reviewer on the talkpage explaining which bits of it are used. In the past I've occasionally found myself citing air accident reports, and those things are huge (often 100+ pages). Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 13:28, 31 August 2013 (UTC)

Name (in headline)

"Hawaiin Airlines" or "Hawaiian Airlines"? Gryllida 13:15, 31 August 2013 (UTC)

This is fixed now, also thank you. Gryllida 13:26, 31 August 2013 (UTC)