Talk:Fundraiser Captain Sir Tom Moore dies aged 100 with COVID-19

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Revision 4604184 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:11, 5 February 2021 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Although the lede was on the long side, I wondered how much to shift out of that paragraph. The final sentence seemed detailed so I shifted tat; the bit about WWII didn't quite feel like lede content, but didn't shift out as easily and was short, so I let it stand. I tweaked the headline to avoid saying he died from Covid-19; cause of death is generally complicated and difficult to verify. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4604184 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:11, 5 February 2021 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Although the lede was on the long side, I wondered how much to shift out of that paragraph. The final sentence seemed detailed so I shifted tat; the bit about WWII didn't quite feel like lede content, but didn't shift out as easily and was short, so I let it stand. I tweaked the headline to avoid saying he died from Covid-19; cause of death is generally complicated and difficult to verify. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.