Talk:Fremantle defeat Sydney, qualify for 2013 Australian Football League Grand Final

Comments

• Headline: What sport, and where in the world?
• Lede: An acronym, such as AFL, should be written out in full on the first occasion; if it'll be used multiple times, after the first, full expansion one gives the initialism in parentheses. Without that, though, the lede, like the headline, doesn't say what sport nor where in the world.

--Pi zero (talk) 02:42, 23 September 2013 (UTC)

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