Talk:Football's Rooney returns to Everton

Review of revision 4329425 [Passed]

Revision 4329425 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:13, 9 July 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The sourcing from BBC is pretty heavy; there were passages I noticed that I wanted to make more distant from source (and I acted on most of them). The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4329425 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:13, 9 July 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The sourcing from BBC is pretty heavy; there were passages I noticed that I wanted to make more distant from source (and I acted on most of them). The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Yes, I felt things were too close -- but that is the style I have used in other contract related news articles. So, I can use the structure of what I have written because it is under CC BY 2.5, I thought. It was more about the doubt what to do if the content was similar to the archives but a source uses the same style?
acagastya 02:40, 10 July 2017 (UTC)

As a kid, I heard many people talking about Rooney. But only football fans would know about him. I should have remembered while naming the article (it was not what I had initially planned). How about this? "Rooney returns to Everton FC?
acagastya 02:43, 10 July 2017 (UTC)

I considered "Rooney returns to Everton FC", but wanted the sport named in full rather than in an initialism, and at the start of the headline rather than at the end. I also considered "Footall: Rooney returns to Everton". --Pi zero (talk) 03:31, 10 July 2017 (UTC)