Talk:Fizzy drinks out of New Zealand schools from 2009

Latest comment: 17 years ago by 70.77.41.100 in topic Needs a bit of work.

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I used the announcement from Pete Hodgson (listed). --Nzgabriel | Talk 05:31, 11 December 2006 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Needs a bit of work. edit

Far too much use of the word agreement. It creates a very redundant article. Other than that rather well written. I recommend you read here: http://www.lifehack.org/articles/lifehack/fifty-50-tools-which-can-help-you-in-writing.html

It links to old articles by Poynter, a well respected journalism school

70.77.41.100 02:27, 13 December 2006 (UTC)Reply[reply]

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