Talk:European Union to reduce carbon emissions by 55% of 1990 levels by 2030
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Revision 4617151 of this article has been reviewed by Acagastya (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:23, 23 April 2021 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Thanks for the article @JJLiu112: and apologies for the delay. Few things that sticks with me to critique -- when talking about percentages, it is important to establish what is considered the base. Please find sources which mention on which day the said event took place -- the BBC hardly does that, knocking "when" from the news. Also, stick with past tense for things that happened in the past. An image of EC President would be good. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4617151 of this article has been reviewed by Acagastya (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:23, 23 April 2021 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Thanks for the article @JJLiu112: and apologies for the delay. Few things that sticks with me to critique -- when talking about percentages, it is important to establish what is considered the base. Please find sources which mention on which day the said event took place -- the BBC hardly does that, knocking "when" from the news. Also, stick with past tense for things that happened in the past. An image of EC President would be good. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |