Talk:Disney to shut down Blue Sky Studios, animation studio behind 'Ice Age'

Review of revision 4605147 [Not ready]

Revision 4605147 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:31, 10 February 2021 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: A headline should be a sentence (without a period at the end). There should be two mutually independent, trust-worthy sources. The first-listed of these sources is, in particular, one I don't recognize. Btw, we do not use footnotes here; cite the sources in a Sources section, using the {{source}} template for each. The first paragraph (the lede) should be a short and to-the-point paragraph about the focal event of the article, briefly summarizing it by succinctly (in, mostly, a very few words each) answering as many as reasonably possible of the five Ws and H about the focal event, and explaining its significance and establishing that it's WN:newsworthy. Here the first sentence is not about the focal event, and has a somewhat advert-ish tone to it (perhaps because the "and many more" phrase is less specific than one generally wants for news). There's an editorial tone here, non-neutral; we want to report just objective, verifiable facts. Total length should be at least three paragraphs, and at least about 50% more text than is current in the article. I recommend reading, first, the fairly short page Wikinews:Pillars of writing, and then perhaps consulting Wikinews:Writing an article which is a tutorial on writing a first article. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4605147 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:31, 10 February 2021 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: A headline should be a sentence (without a period at the end). There should be two mutually independent, trust-worthy sources. The first-listed of these sources is, in particular, one I don't recognize. Btw, we do not use footnotes here; cite the sources in a Sources section, using the {{source}} template for each. The first paragraph (the lede) should be a short and to-the-point paragraph about the focal event of the article, briefly summarizing it by succinctly (in, mostly, a very few words each) answering as many as reasonably possible of the five Ws and H about the focal event, and explaining its significance and establishing that it's WN:newsworthy. Here the first sentence is not about the focal event, and has a somewhat advert-ish tone to it (perhaps because the "and many more" phrase is less specific than one generally wants for news). There's an editorial tone here, non-neutral; we want to report just objective, verifiable facts. Total length should be at least three paragraphs, and at least about 50% more text than is current in the article. I recommend reading, first, the fairly short page Wikinews:Pillars of writing, and then perhaps consulting Wikinews:Writing an article which is a tutorial on writing a first article. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4605314 [Passed]

Revision 4605314 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:51, 10 February 2021 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4605314 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:51, 10 February 2021 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.