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Talk:Cypriot court clears all of wrongdoing in Greek air disaster


Note to reviewerEdit

Some of the accident description has been sourced from prior articles. Alongside the sources, it is likely you will only need to check one of the related articles. I would suggest Cypriot court begins Greek air disaster trial. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 15:33, 22 December 2011 (UTC)

I'm also drawing on Cyprus charges five over 2005 air crash that killed 121. --Pi zero (talk) 18:27, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
Damnit. Sorry, you're right. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 18:29, 22 December 2011 (UTC)

Review of revision 1347303 [Passed]Edit

Edit request (done)Edit

A sentence needs to be re-written because it's misleadingEdit


It's the sentence that begins "After trying but failing to resuscitate Merten, the fighter pilots saw the trainee pilot.....". It sounds like the fighter pilots tried to revive Merten, when it probably means to say that the student pilot aboard the 737 tried to resuscitate Captain Merten. I would re-write it myself, but it's archived. --Kenatipo (talk) 01:00, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

  •   Not done. You say "probably means", we don't guess at what is/was intended. If there is an error, it would require a correction notice - and clear evidence that what the article states is wrong, contradicts sources the article relies upon, etc. --Brian McNeil / talk 09:39, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
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