Talk:Clash between Palestinians and Israeli forces leaves at least 155 injured
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Revision 4674244 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:08, 17 April 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Please do make sure your Wikilinks are functional. I found two which were broken. The final paragraph was a little bit sloppy. It said both "increased tensions" and "heightened tensions" which is quite redundant. Further, it used a lot of present tense which was unnecessary. Lastly, and I think this is important: When stating motivations for events or actions of people, Wikinews cannot speak authoritatively. Such claims must be attributed. We do not know that Ramadan and Passover coinciding is the reason. We can only report that other people say it is. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4674244 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:08, 17 April 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Please do make sure your Wikilinks are functional. I found two which were broken. The final paragraph was a little bit sloppy. It said both "increased tensions" and "heightened tensions" which is quite redundant. Further, it used a lot of present tense which was unnecessary. Lastly, and I think this is important: When stating motivations for events or actions of people, Wikinews cannot speak authoritatively. Such claims must be attributed. We do not know that Ramadan and Passover coinciding is the reason. We can only report that other people say it is. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |