Talk:Citizenship of Australian terrorists overseas under question

Review of revision 3541194 [Passed]

Revision 3541194 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:15, 27 May 2015 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Of the points addressed during review — for which see the detailed edit history — one worth flagging out is the lengthy passage about the severed head, which was copied verbatim from source and superficially "scuffed up". Do not do that. If you can't find a thoroughly different way to convey the information, leave it out; but you should always be able to find a different way to say it. Since it was one passage (other places with distance-from-source concerns were milder by comparison), I addressed it during review. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 3541194 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:15, 27 May 2015 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Of the points addressed during review — for which see the detailed edit history — one worth flagging out is the lengthy passage about the severed head, which was copied verbatim from source and superficially "scuffed up". Do not do that. If you can't find a thoroughly different way to convey the information, leave it out; but you should always be able to find a different way to say it. Since it was one passage (other places with distance-from-source concerns were milder by comparison), I addressed it during review. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.