Talk:Christopher Mackin murder: police remand two in custody after court appearance

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Revision 1429806 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:55, 9 March 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Two main difficulties were addressed during review. Text distance from source. Focus. The article is about the Vallidays, with a brief mention of the man who was released. But the release was mentioned first in the headline, and the Vallidays weren't even mentioned in the first paragraph. Care was taken for review independence; the edits were factored to make the detailed changes visible via diffs. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1429806 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:55, 9 March 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Two main difficulties were addressed during review. Text distance from source. Focus. The article is about the Vallidays, with a brief mention of the man who was released. But the release was mentioned first in the headline, and the Vallidays weren't even mentioned in the first paragraph. Care was taken for review independence; the edits were factored to make the detailed changes visible via diffs. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.