Talk:Chris Moyles announces departure from BBC Radio 1 breakfast show

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Revision 1553499 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:33, 11 July 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Not sure if the gallery at the bottom is better than putting the two photos into the article, but I left as the original author had it. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1553499 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:33, 11 July 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Not sure if the gallery at the bottom is better than putting the two photos into the article, but I left as the original author had it. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

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I struggled a bit with trying to make this paragraph cohesive. Any help or corrections would be appreciated. There's a lot of "[...]" quotes. --SVTCobra 23:14, 11 July 2012 (UTC)