Talk:Burundi President Pierre Nkurunziza dies aged 55

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Revision 4569546 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:33, 11 June 2020 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: @Chandlerjoeyross: Please work on distance-from-source. One gets the impression you're using a news-writing technique that involves copying-and-then-modifying. That doesn't work; to iron the kinks out of this I had to do more than I'd be comfortable doing on a regular basis. There were rather a lot of slightly-over-length verbatim-from-source passages (say, four to six words) occurring in the same context; one of these might even be coincidence, and wouldn't be terribly concerning, so I'd just tweak it to eliminate the problem and scarcely register it, but a bunch of them in a short piece is more concerning. And then there was one distinctly longer passage, which was especially concerning not only because of its length but because it straddled a sentence boundary, including some words at the end of one sentence and more words at the beginning of the next. There were also some other glitches, of course; see the revision history, as always. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4569546 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:33, 11 June 2020 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: @Chandlerjoeyross: Please work on distance-from-source. One gets the impression you're using a news-writing technique that involves copying-and-then-modifying. That doesn't work; to iron the kinks out of this I had to do more than I'd be comfortable doing on a regular basis. There were rather a lot of slightly-over-length verbatim-from-source passages (say, four to six words) occurring in the same context; one of these might even be coincidence, and wouldn't be terribly concerning, so I'd just tweak it to eliminate the problem and scarcely register it, but a bunch of them in a short piece is more concerning. And then there was one distinctly longer passage, which was especially concerning not only because of its length but because it straddled a sentence boundary, including some words at the end of one sentence and more words at the beginning of the next. There were also some other glitches, of course; see the revision history, as always. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.