Talk:British musician Robin Gibb dies at age 62
- Once again, we have this persnickety little issue of "breaking news". Mr. Gibb died, there are(to my knowledge) no accusations of foul play, or mysterious circumstances, so......what's "breaking" here? "It just happened." isn't (I think) breaking. Someone please correct me if I'm wrong! Bddpaux (talk) 20:45, 21 May 2012 (UTC)
- You're correct. A breaking story is one that is expected to have new developments at any moment, and particularly within the 24-hour window for substantive changes post-publication. --Pi zero (talk) 21:08, 21 May 2012 (UTC)
Review of revision 1506000 [Not ready]
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Revision 1506000 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:55, 21 May 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: At least 90% of this article is perfect! Look carefully, at 4th from last paragraph.....it's a great quote, but I don't know....there's just something style-wise that does not fit about that paragraph...I can't put my finger on it. Maybe you need to delineate who he said that to/when he said it.Bddpaux (talk) 20:55, 21 May 2012 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1506000 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:55, 21 May 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: At least 90% of this article is perfect! Look carefully, at 4th from last paragraph.....it's a great quote, but I don't know....there's just something style-wise that does not fit about that paragraph...I can't put my finger on it. Maybe you need to delineate who he said that to/when he said it.Bddpaux (talk) 20:55, 21 May 2012 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 1506335 [Not ready]
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Revision 1506335 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:35, 22 May 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: OK...I can't see that you addressed my previous issue(s)[other than 'breaking']--so, let's take this angle: tighten up/clean up the bottom 4 paragraphs. Bddpaux (talk) 01:35, 22 May 2012 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1506335 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:35, 22 May 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: OK...I can't see that you addressed my previous issue(s)[other than 'breaking']--so, let's take this angle: tighten up/clean up the bottom 4 paragraphs. Bddpaux (talk) 01:35, 22 May 2012 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 1506507 [Passed]
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Revision 1506507 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:07, 22 May 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1506507 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:07, 22 May 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |