Talk:Body of alumnus found at Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute, New York
CLEANUP edit
{{cleanup|Entire parts of text "quoted" from other media must be reformulated, or else they are copyright violations. Please write a report based on multiple sources instead of copying whole chuncks of text from other media outlets.}} --Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 10:50, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
The only remaining extended quotation is from an open letter to the institute which should be treated as a press release. The article should be suitably cleaned up at this point.
- Yes, excellent, thank you!!! --Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 16:05, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
Moved text edit
Moved from article:--Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 20:00, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
The Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute campus television club, RPI TV, is currently working on a full transcript of the press conference and will be updating their club website with news as it comes in. [1]
The following trivia/linkspam was also removed:
The stairwell edit
The stairwell in question includes the third (ground) floor through the ninth floor. Stairs spiral up in a square, one revolution per floor, leaving a square shaft down which the victim could have fallen. The other stairwell of the building is similar but extends down to the 2nd floor (the basement of the building). The CII has no floor 1. Students have historically dropped miscellaneous items down that taller stairwell [pictures].128.113.148.177 20:23, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
Map overload edit
The amount of maps/aerials/satelite might be a bit much. SVTCobra 22:56, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
- Removed.--Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 12:54, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
Is about to be deleted. Please provide source and licencing information.--Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 12:54, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
Universit PR release edit
The RPI press release, which was on the home page, is no longer there. I tried to google it and got a hit but they hadn't cached it.--SVTCobra 01:10, 3 April 2007 (UTC)