Talk:Bodies found in trailer park in Brunswick, Georgia, US

This is not ready for review.

• "It is a chilling fact that the plantation's website boasts: "You'll be proud to call this home."" is editorialising and thus a violation of WN:NPOV
• The article makes no consideration of the international audience. The incident is in the United States and this is not made particularly clear (FYI there is a Georgia in Russia)

--Brian McNeil / ^talk 12:32, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

I removed the whole "chilling fact" sentence - I can't see a purpose for it, although it wouldn't be out of place in a tabloid. I also added "in the US state of" before the first mention of Georgia. The "United States" sidebar should also be a good indicator. Is it ready for review now, or does it still need more work? Dendodge _T\^C(en.wp) 12:59, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Yes, it is ready for review

Thanks for changing the problems. I do think that it is now necessary for this article to be reviewed. Rayboy8 (talk) 16:10, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Review of revision 868881 [Passed]

Revision 868881 of this article has been reviewed by Dendodge (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:46, 30 August 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I have made some minor edits to this article (for style and clarity), but do not consider myself to have been involved in the article's development in any significant way, therefore allowing me to review this article. If you believe that I have a conflict of interest, drop me a line so i know for the future. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 868881 of this article has been reviewed by Dendodge (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:46, 30 August 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I have made some minor edits to this article (for style and clarity), but do not consider myself to have been involved in the article's development in any significant way, therefore allowing me to review this article. If you believe that I have a conflict of interest, drop me a line so i know for the future. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.