Talk:Bishop Emeritus Dinualdo Gutierrez of Marbel, Philippines dies

Review of revision 4463674 [Passed]

Revision 4463674 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:39, 11 February 2019 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: This is marginally up to our minimal length standards. Another sentence or two would be good. A bit more about his significance would be gone; I'll allow that the death of a bishop emeritus meets WN:CARCRASH, but a bit more of a sense of the scope of his public profile might be achieved in a few words in the lede. This is not, of course, an obituary as such, which would entail biographical information about the deceased (as noted in the usage note at Category:Obituaries). The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4463674 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:39, 11 February 2019 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: This is marginally up to our minimal length standards. Another sentence or two would be good. A bit more about his significance would be gone; I'll allow that the death of a bishop emeritus meets WN:CARCRASH, but a bit more of a sense of the scope of his public profile might be achieved in a few words in the lede. This is not, of course, an obituary as such, which would entail biographical information about the deceased (as noted in the usage note at Category:Obituaries). The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.