Talk:BP lose laptop containing sensitive claimant data

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Rayboy8 in topic Review of revision 1204941 [Passed]

Review of revision 1204561 [Failed] edit

  1. The ref format is never used on Wikinews articles.
  2. Wikipedia is not considered a reliable source; you may, from there, lift the source they cite - provided it is accessible and you have verified it backs you up.
  3. This could do with far more use of active voice. --Brian McNeil / talk 06:39, 30 March 2011 (UTC)Reply[reply]
The error has been fixed. Though I am at a lost to what exactly needs to be active. Phearson (talk) 12:13, 30 March 2011 (UTC)Reply[reply]

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