Talk:Australian solar racing team parades at Sydney campus send-off

Review of revision 1986341 [Not ready]

Revision 1986341 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:51, 19 September 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: This is tagged as containing OR, but there are no reporter's notes on the collaboration (aka talk) page; in fact, there is no collaboration page. See WN:PILLARS#source. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: The headline should be a sentence; currently it's a noun phrase. Acronyms are usually to be avoided in headlines; also, it should be clear from the headline where in the world this is (international readers aren't necessarily going to recognize "UNSW"). Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1986341 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:51, 19 September 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: This is tagged as containing OR, but there are no reporter's notes on the collaboration (aka talk) page; in fact, there is no collaboration page. See WN:PILLARS#source. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: The headline should be a sentence; currently it's a noun phrase. Acronyms are usually to be avoided in headlines; also, it should be clear from the headline where in the world this is (international readers aren't necessarily going to recognize "UNSW"). Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Original reporting: photographs taken during the events, mention of the car being carried over the stairs, driver and passenger alighting at this time.Wikiwide (talk) 21:04, 19 September 2013 (UTC)

Review of revision 1986777 [Passed]

Revision 1986777 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:22, 20 September 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: For a piece like this, typically the reporter takes hand-written notes, which are provided to us either by transcribing them or by scanning them in. The rule of thumb for OR is to try to provide more documentation than needed. I've no idea where the 140kg figure came from; it wasn't in the listed sources, nor mentioned on the talk page. A number of details weren't in the listed EVN source but were in the earlier EVN article to which it referred —for example, the assertion that eVe is the team's fifth car— and I therefore explicitly listed the earlier article, but some details still were not forthcoming. I removed some and adjusted wording on others, but I've a sense that some source was missing here. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1986777 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:22, 20 September 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: For a piece like this, typically the reporter takes hand-written notes, which are provided to us either by transcribing them or by scanning them in. The rule of thumb for OR is to try to provide more documentation than needed. I've no idea where the 140kg figure came from; it wasn't in the listed sources, nor mentioned on the talk page. A number of details weren't in the listed EVN source but were in the earlier EVN article to which it referred —for example, the assertion that eVe is the team's fifth car— and I therefore explicitly listed the earlier article, but some details still were not forthcoming. I removed some and adjusted wording on others, but I've a sense that some source was missing here. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.