User talk:Vanished user 24kwjf10h32h/2009-2010 France Rugby Championship: Toulouse beats Castres
Translation from French, apparently original. --Diego Grez return fire 19:04, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
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- Isn't Original considered as second source? --Diego Grez return fire 19:44, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
- My French might not be up to scratch, but I cannot see any original reporting notification on the French Wikinews page. The article also requires a stylistic makeover. — μ 08:36, May 10 2010 (UTC)
Review of revision 1016226 [Failed] edit
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Revision 1016226 of this article has been reviewed by Microchip08 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 08:54, 10 May 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Possibly a derivative work, so needs copyright attribution? (I don't know the policy on translations) Weird verbs have been used, making it unreadable to the average reader. This needs to be cleaned up before I can pass a review. You appear to have left the word order as it is in French, or possibly used an online translator(?). "Received" is hardly ever used in sports articles, and here I have no idea what it means. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1016226 of this article has been reviewed by Microchip08 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 08:54, 10 May 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Possibly a derivative work, so needs copyright attribution? (I don't know the policy on translations) Weird verbs have been used, making it unreadable to the average reader. This needs to be cleaned up before I can pass a review. You appear to have left the word order as it is in French, or possibly used an online translator(?). "Received" is hardly ever used in sports articles, and here I have no idea what it means. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |