User talk:TrueBlue~enwikinews/London: Soldier hacked to death

Review of revision 1906550 [Not ready]

Revision 1906550 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:04, 24 May 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: There are internal links in the article. These need to be removed. Please go to the front page, look at published articles and see how sources are dealt with. The lead does not say much. When did this event actually happen? The lead needs to say. It needs a strong focus on the who, what, where, when, why and how overall. Because of the slowness in reviewing, this has pretty much gone/will go stale and needs additional sources to keep it fresh. This means new information about what happened. The image source is not credited. Please see the front page for examples of how to credit images. (Then look at the code and follow that example.) Article has no categories. Please look for articles on similar topics and add relevant categories. Categories are like tags on other news sites. It makes it easier to find similar content. Priminister is a spelling error. This needs to be fixed. Ideally, it also needs to state Prime Minister of which country. It would also be nice to see relevant interwiki links. An infobox would be nice. See main page and look at other published articles for ideas about relevant ones. Newspaper names should be in italics. (Also, repeat, please do not use external links.) Look at the inverted pyramid and make sure you follow it. It might have been but it is not quite clear all the time. After these problems are addressed, please read the style guide and double check to make sure that you followed it. Then resubmit. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1906550 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:04, 24 May 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: There are internal links in the article. These need to be removed. Please go to the front page, look at published articles and see how sources are dealt with. The lead does not say much. When did this event actually happen? The lead needs to say. It needs a strong focus on the who, what, where, when, why and how overall. Because of the slowness in reviewing, this has pretty much gone/will go stale and needs additional sources to keep it fresh. This means new information about what happened. The image source is not credited. Please see the front page for examples of how to credit images. (Then look at the code and follow that example.) Article has no categories. Please look for articles on similar topics and add relevant categories. Categories are like tags on other news sites. It makes it easier to find similar content. Priminister is a spelling error. This needs to be fixed. Ideally, it also needs to state Prime Minister of which country. It would also be nice to see relevant interwiki links. An infobox would be nice. See main page and look at other published articles for ideas about relevant ones. Newspaper names should be in italics. (Also, repeat, please do not use external links.) Look at the inverted pyramid and make sure you follow it. It might have been but it is not quite clear all the time. After these problems are addressed, please read the style guide and double check to make sure that you followed it. Then resubmit. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.