User talk:Polly691/Men denied anti-cancer vaccine

Review of revision 1224478 [Failed]

Revision 1224478 of this article has been reviewed by Killing Vector (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:57, 1 May 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Image has no copyright information Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: Only 1 recent source cited (others are from 2010 or earlier), there need to be at least 2 for summary articles NPOV: Not ready: Stronly biased in favor of drug company. "CSL continues to fight to make the vaccine available to men" for example. Only 1 sentence discusses Australian government's reasoning. Style: Not ready: Many formatting issues. Headline too vague. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1224478 of this article has been reviewed by Killing Vector (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:57, 1 May 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Image has no copyright information Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: Only 1 recent source cited (others are from 2010 or earlier), there need to be at least 2 for summary articles NPOV: Not ready: Stronly biased in favor of drug company. "CSL continues to fight to make the vaccine available to men" for example. Only 1 sentence discusses Australian government's reasoning. Style: Not ready: Many formatting issues. Headline too vague. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.