User talk:B.j Shepherd/Australian milk retail price war hitting farmers

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Revision 1199533 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:43, 22 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: No. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: Too short, as well as I find this not newsworthy. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1199533 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:43, 22 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: No. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: Too short, as well as I find this not newsworthy. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

• This could be newsworthy. However, it should be in paragraphs; follow the Style Guide; mention where this is taking place up-front; use less sources if possible; ditch the byline that makes me suspicious of copyvio. --Brian McNeil / ^talk 02:52, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

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Stale?

I just saw the story about the beer on the news the other day. I'll follow it up I myself live in Australia. This story has to be over two weeks old now! A better path may be the recent action Fosters have taken over plans to severely reduce their prices at retail (a move by Coles). ~YTT ^{T | C} 10:59, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

• Fosters? As in the 'alleged' beer? ;-)

It might be interesting to compare the two since on is pretty much an essential; the other most certainly not. --82.132.139.49 (talk) 11:23, 23 March 2011 (UTC)