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Comments from feedback form - "Some of the sentence structure..."

Some of the sentence structure could've used a little tightening up in places.

Bddpaux (talk)‎23:54, 2 February 2012

So could your mom.

Sorry, I couldn't resist. FYI this is not the place to critique the article's writing, that would be Collaboration Page. This is the place to express your opinions and thoughts on the matter. By the way, what are your thoughts on this matter?

67.142.172.23 (talk)‎01:37, 5 February 2012
 
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