Comments from feedback form - "The article is boring as it is..."

The article is boring as it is not written creatively. It made me stop reading from the first line. Please work on the headlines of the news, as it's boring and so long that I didn't care to read. It's not an encylopedia news, you make it seem like that which just does not work. Learn from BBC not cnn because cnn over exaggerates not that you write like cnn but I am just saying if you wanna improve, learn from the bbc. They articles are well written in a creative manner with a good headlines. YOur news like me reading shakespeare and you know shakespeare is boring.

94.168.44.110 (talk)19:01, 4 September 2011