Comments from feedback form - "Facial wounds,no customers or ..."

Comments from feedback form - "Facial wounds,no customers or ..."

Facial wounds,no customers or staff were hurt and then people were shot? The four people that had facial wounds was a result of the shooting. They might have not been shot in the face? Did they get them from the party before hand. Poorly written.

168.166.76.3 (talk)23:51, 22 August 2012

Learn to read. "Four, including the gunman who had facial wounds, are being treated ..."

This is a common use for the comma; to separate a clause without which the sentence could stand alone. You have read as-if the comma was placed after the word gunman.

Brian McNeil / talk01:29, 23 August 2012