Not bad, just a few minor grammar errors.
Fragment of a discussion from Comments:Delta Air Lines jetliner skids off New York airport's runway
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"members" after "crew" is what Language Log calls a "zombie rule". However, because this is a wiki, you have the ability to submit an edit to the article (since it's not yet in the fully protected archives).