Not bad, just a few minor grammar errors.
Well, you're supposed to put "members" after "crew". Overall, the article was okay, but the news you reported wasn't so thrilling.
This is a wiki; we publish articles that are submitted and pass review. If you'd like to see different articles, read WN:Pillars of Wikinews writing, then WN:Writing an article, and for good measure WN:Style guide, and try your hand at submitting an article.
"members" after "crew" is what Language Log calls a "zombie rule". However, because this is a wiki, you have the ability to submit an edit to the article (since it's not yet in the fully protected archives).