Talk:Whale kills trainer at SeaWorld in Orlando, Florida

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Revision 964183 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:24, 25 February 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Concern

Please see this. Before my copyedit, the state/country where this occurred was mentioned neither in the title nor article text, making it more difficult to understand for an international audience. This shouldn't have gone unnoticed through review. Tempodivalse [talk] 01:32, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

I forgot the whole international thing for a moment there. I put the state as part of a wikilink and for whatever stupid reason, I forgot to add it mentioning the state. The fault it mine. I'm a bit tired after the day. --Mikemoral♪♫ 01:41, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry, we all make mistakes sometimes. I frequently don't put enough context in my articles either. :-) Tempodivalse [talk] 02:09, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

Meh, the precise location wasn't exactly the point or important IMHO. "Killer Whale goes on rampage" much more fun. --ShakataGaNai ^{^_^} 01:43, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

"the precise location wasn't exactly the point or important" = ????? Describing *where* something happens should be our number one priority when reporting. Remember the five Ws! :-b Tempodivalse [talk] 02:09, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

And the H... --Mikemoral♪♫ 02:13, 25 February 2010 (UTC)