Talk:United States: Baltimore federal grand jury indict man of international conspiracy in Cameroon, Central Africa
Copyvio
editBigKrow (talk) 19:28, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
Conspiracy internationally has Maryland Man arrested Violation unlikely 13.8% similarity justice.gov/opa/pr/maryland-man-indicted-conspiring-provide-material-support-armed-separatist-fighters-murder
BigKrow (talk) 19:28, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- is this AI written? Gryllida (talk) 20:50, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- Yea BigKrow (talk) 21:04, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Gryllida AI written BigKrow (talk) 21:10, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- Maryland man indicted in relation to international conspiracy
- Violation unlikely
- 10.7%
- similarity
- tampafp.com/maryland-man-indicted-for-conspiring-to-support-cameroonian-separatist-violence BigKrow (talk) 21:10, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- Tell this AI "Do not forget to quote quotes. Do not plagiarise, i.e.. rewrite in your own words everything. Do not make stuff up based on your knowlwdge, only include information present in sources" to it next time, please? Gryllida (talk) 21:24, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- Ok I won't add ai articles anymore, just in my own words. Apologies. @Gryllida BigKrow (talk) 21:52, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- Hey it might actually do a good job if you tell it that. :-P I tried that with chatgpt once and it helped. Gryllida (talk) 22:02, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- (I literally put that quote which I wrote above, into my request to the chatgpt) Gryllida (talk) 22:03, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- I might look into that but for now I will only write news articles in my own words. Thanks @Gryllida BigKrow (talk) 22:04, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- Ok I won't add ai articles anymore, just in my own words. Apologies. @Gryllida BigKrow (talk) 21:52, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Gryllida AI written BigKrow (talk) 21:10, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- Yea BigKrow (talk) 21:04, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
Major revision requested
editHi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025 (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please let me know)
Could you please do a rewrite based on the following:
- The text reads as biased in some places highlighting an opinion more than a fact or a news. Please reword.
- The first paragraph is too wordy. Please rephrase.
- The second paragraph has same meaning as the first one. I suggest removing second paragraph.
- Infobox and wikilinks are missing.
- The headline is in passive voice. Please move the page.
Thank you.
Regards, -- Gryllida (talk) 20:57, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- P.S. Please add more categories. Gryllida (talk) 20:59, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- The headline is still in passive voice? Gryllida (talk) 22:05, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- How is it now? BigKrow (talk) 22:08, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Gryllida BigKrow (talk) 22:08, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- Hi @BigKrow 'Man indicted' is passive voice. How about:
- United States: Baltimore federal grand jury indict man of international conspiracy in Cameroon, Central Africa
- Please check I used the prepositions correctly, it may or may not be correct headline.
- Thanks, Gryllida (talk) 22:12, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- I think I got it, thanks. @Gryllida BigKrow (talk) 22:14, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- Hi @BigKrow 'Man indicted' is passive voice. How about:
- Thank you so much for the revision @BigKrow Appreciated!!! <3
- Regards, -- Gryllida (talk) 22:56, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Gryllida BigKrow (talk) 22:08, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- How is it now? BigKrow (talk) 22:08, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
Adding date happened
edit@Lofi Gurl BigKrow (talk) 21:07, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- Kool you handled it. BigKrow (talk) 21:08, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- yup Lofi Gurl (talk) 21:10, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you @Lofi Gurl :-)
- Regards, -- Gryllida (talk) 22:56, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- yup Lofi Gurl (talk) 21:10, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
Copyvio
editBigKrow (talk) 21:56, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
- Maryland man indicted in relation to international conspiracy
- Violation unlikely
- 7.4%
- similarity
- upi.com/Top_News/World-News/2025/04/25/Cameroon-Tataw-DOJ-charges-Maryland-man-Amba-Boys/2901745602966 BigKrow (talk) 21:56, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
Review of revision 4852580 [Passed]
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Revision 4852580 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:49, 25 April 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I tried to clean up after the AI as much as I could. Hopefully, at least according to what I could verify, the article now meets the requirements for publishing. I presented a list of things to ask AI to do, and not to do. This is posted at the talk page. This could be useful to include as part of a next request to AI, when prompting it to write an article. If needed, please make further edits within less than 24 hours after publishing; once done, please add 'Review requested' section at this talk page, with {{subst:ping-assistance-required}} line in it to alert all reviewers. Thank you. If you'd like to generate an audio version of the article, please check this discussion. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4852580 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:49, 25 April 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I tried to clean up after the AI as much as I could. Hopefully, at least according to what I could verify, the article now meets the requirements for publishing. I presented a list of things to ask AI to do, and not to do. This is posted at the talk page. This could be useful to include as part of a next request to AI, when prompting it to write an article. If needed, please make further edits within less than 24 hours after publishing; once done, please add 'Review requested' section at this talk page, with {{subst:ping-assistance-required}} line in it to alert all reviewers. Thank you. If you'd like to generate an audio version of the article, please check this discussion. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |