Talk:United States: Baltimore federal grand jury indict man of international conspiracy in Cameroon, Central Africa

Latest comment: 2 months ago by Gryllida in topic Adding date happened

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BigKrow (talk) 19:28, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply

Conspiracy internationally has Maryland Man arrested Violation unlikely 13.8% similarity justice.gov/opa/pr/maryland-man-indicted-conspiring-provide-material-support-armed-separatist-fighters-murder

BigKrow (talk) 19:28, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply

is this AI written? Gryllida (talk) 20:50, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
Yea BigKrow (talk) 21:04, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
@Gryllida AI written BigKrow (talk) 21:10, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
Maryland man indicted in relation to international conspiracy
Violation unlikely
10.7%
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tampafp.com/maryland-man-indicted-for-conspiring-to-support-cameroonian-separatist-violence BigKrow (talk) 21:10, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
Tell this AI "Do not forget to quote quotes. Do not plagiarise, i.e.. rewrite in your own words everything. Do not make stuff up based on your knowlwdge, only include information present in sources" to it next time, please? Gryllida (talk) 21:24, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
Ok I won't add ai articles anymore, just in my own words. Apologies. @Gryllida BigKrow (talk) 21:52, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
Hey it might actually do a good job if you tell it that. :-P I tried that with chatgpt once and it helped. Gryllida (talk) 22:02, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
(I literally put that quote which I wrote above, into my request to the chatgpt) Gryllida (talk) 22:03, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
I might look into that but for now I will only write news articles in my own words. Thanks @Gryllida BigKrow (talk) 22:04, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply

Major revision requested

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Hi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025 (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please let me know)

Could you please do a rewrite based on the following:

  • The text reads as biased in some places highlighting an opinion more than a fact or a news. Please reword.
  • The first paragraph is too wordy. Please rephrase.
  • The second paragraph has same meaning as the first one. I suggest removing second paragraph.
  • Infobox and wikilinks are missing.
  • The headline is in passive voice. Please move the page.

Thank you.

Regards, -- Gryllida (talk) 20:57, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply

P.S. Please add more categories. Gryllida (talk) 20:59, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
The headline is still in passive voice? Gryllida (talk) 22:05, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
How is it now? BigKrow (talk) 22:08, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
@Gryllida BigKrow (talk) 22:08, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
Hi @BigKrow 'Man indicted' is passive voice. How about:
  • United States: Baltimore federal grand jury indict man of international conspiracy in Cameroon, Central Africa
Please check I used the prepositions correctly, it may or may not be correct headline.
Thanks, Gryllida (talk) 22:12, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
I think I got it, thanks. @Gryllida BigKrow (talk) 22:14, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
Thank you so much for the revision @BigKrow Appreciated!!! <3
Regards, -- Gryllida (talk) 22:56, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply

Adding date happened

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@Lofi Gurl BigKrow (talk) 21:07, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply

Kool you handled it. BigKrow (talk) 21:08, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
yup Lofi Gurl (talk) 21:10, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
Thank you @Lofi Gurl :-)
Regards, -- Gryllida (talk) 22:56, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply

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BigKrow (talk) 21:56, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
Maryland man indicted in relation to international conspiracy
Violation unlikely
7.4%
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upi.com/Top_News/World-News/2025/04/25/Cameroon-Tataw-DOJ-charges-Maryland-man-Amba-Boys/2901745602966 BigKrow (talk) 21:56, 25 April 2025 (UTC)Reply

Review of revision 4852580 [Passed]

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