Talk:US free speech lawyer Marc Randazza discusses Glenn Beck parody

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Interview forwarded to scoop@wikinewsie.org. Cirt (talk) 00:50, 19 October 2009 (UTC)

Review of revision 899124 [Passed]

Revision 899124 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:56, 19 October 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Still has too much passive voice, repeated use of colons to introduce quotes - bad, breaks article flow. was more legalistic than journalistic in the intro. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 899124 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:56, 19 October 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Still has too much passive voice, repeated use of colons to introduce quotes - bad, breaks article flow. was more legalistic than journalistic in the intro. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Thanks for the review. You make some good points, and thank you for the good copyediting! :) I removed a bit more passive voice, and removed a colon [1], [2], [3]. Cheers, Cirt (talk) 11:06, 19 October 2009 (UTC)