Talk:US astronaut Neil Armstrong dies

Review of revision 1598372 [Not ready]

Revision 1598372 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:09, 26 August 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: See below NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The NBC source...I didn't find anything in the article that mentioned anything from that article; it's OK to leave it, but it'll need to be moved to "other sources" or something of that ilk. Additionally, after careful review, I can't find any mention in the sources about the divorce; if it's in there, I just missed it. Please point out for me anything pertaining to these issues which I may've missed; a great topic and an EXCELLENT EFFORT! Clear, concise, poignant.....a good read. Just needs a spot of cleanup and it'll be ready! --Bddpaux (talk) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1598372 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:09, 26 August 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: See below NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The NBC source...I didn't find anything in the article that mentioned anything from that article; it's OK to leave it, but it'll need to be moved to "other sources" or something of that ilk. Additionally, after careful review, I can't find any mention in the sources about the divorce; if it's in there, I just missed it. Please point out for me anything pertaining to these issues which I may've missed; a great topic and an EXCELLENT EFFORT! Clear, concise, poignant.....a good read. Just needs a spot of cleanup and it'll be ready! --Bddpaux (talk) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

I got the divorce information from the ABC News. --Dialh (talk) 03:44, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

• Comment Excess sources aren't failing grounds, just a PITA for reviewers. --Brian McNeil / ^talk 10:50, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1598774 [Passed]

Revision 1598774 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:50, 26 August 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1598774 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:50, 26 August 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.